redyellowblueorangegreenpurplemaroonviolet. Colliding. Expanding. In an Ozean.
i've seen amateur poets ruining poems, trying to rhyme the lines and making no sense out of the matter, but yours scores on both points. keep improving now. Love! =)
SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM ASIYA! :")xx
Thangoo Anubhav! :)@ Isha : I really didn't have any hopes ra! :D
Awesome ba! Really liked it. Did you go through a break-up or did I read too much into it?
Thanks ba! :PBreak-up was it.
I'm so moved!! Whoever you wrote these lines for should be really fortunate to have you...
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